Fewer…But Better

I follow writer Nathan Baugh on LinkedIn and enjoy his insights about writing, communication, storytelling and building audiences. His site is named “World Builders” and he offers a newsletter that I enjoy reading. I love his tagline:

“The newsletter to make you a smarter storyteller.”

His most recent newsletter offered wisdom that crawled into my circuitry. Maybe it’s because I’m juggling projects and trying to hone the effectiveness of my writing across genres. Maybe it’s the natural evolution of wanting to do better, be better. I’m not sure.

The advice Baugh imparted isn’t new, but it reminded me of the importance of readiness. We can soak up all the input in the world but if we don’t have the capacity for marination – to make meaning – it couldn’t be more meaningless, could it? I can be quite adept at nodding, smiling, acknowledging helpful hints, but it’s the application of the medicine, the technique, that matters. Letting it sink in until I know precisely how to make use of the message.

Two things jumped out in Baugh’s latest offering, Fewer Ideas, But Better:

Fewer plots, but better. Fewer characters, but better. Fewer themes, but better. Fewer scenes, but better.

When you scrap one part of your story, it doesn’t just simplify. You’re actually giving the other, more important parts of your story space to breathe.

Editing…simplifying.

All of which led to a little gaming on my part. As I draft short pieces like this blog post, I’m trying to step away before publishing. Give the piece a little breathing room before I return to it, see if I can whittle a few words while zeroing in on the point.

Baugh’s perspective prompted insight about who I am as a human, who happens to enjoy writing. The human always comes first…words flowing from the inside out, reflecting the interior. Head, heart, memories, hopes, dreams, worries.

My glimmer was this: I have a nasty repetition habit. Saying something one way, and then another – and, for good measure, occasionally sidewinding around one more time to be sure the reader has the best shot at gleaning…whatever it is I’m trying to say. And that, my friends, is a personality foible.

After years of wrestling to be heard as a child, my communication default in adulthood carries that faint echo, even now.

Make sure you’re heard, Vicki. Understood.

Thank you for reading and to Nathan for providing a gateway to self-understanding.

Vicki 😊

https://www.worldbuilders.ai/p/fewer-ideas-but-better


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76 responses to “Fewer…But Better”

  1. I think simple is better. But….doesn’t it seem things are more complex?

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    1. Gosh yes…true, true. Especially in life, right now. 💕

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  2. I can attest to the fact that you are always heard and understood through your writing, Vicki. And you are also a role model for personal growth and lifelong learning. 😊

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    1. Oh my goodness. What a way to start the day. Thank you, Jane. So much! 🥰

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      1. I second what Jane said!

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  3. Serendipity strikes again, Vicki. So interesting that you published this post just an hour after my post reviewing Joshua Becker’s book “Things That Matter”. “Less But Better” is one of the many powerful messages that come from that book. As I wrap up the Plain Language Certificate that I’ve been working on for five years, I firmly believe that less is more when it comes to writing. There’s nothing better than a clear, simple, powerful message!

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    1. Oh my goodness! I haven’t had a chance to read your post yet but you know how much I love it when you and I are “vibing”. Can’t wait to read. Becker’s book sounds fab. Cheers to your accomplishments and for championing “less is more”
      Xo, dear one! 🥰❤️🥰

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      1. 🤗 Enjoy your day! And stay tuned. I’ll be incorporating some of my learnings into my monthly goals for February.

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        1. Oh….yay! 🥰❤️🙂

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  4. I love this piece Vicki. I’m often struck by the marination process. “…but it’s the application of the medicine, the technique, that matters. Letting it sink in until I know precisely how to make use of the message.” I used to discount this part of the process, but it’s such an important part, thinking about how things touch us and where they fit and how they might touch others too. I think it’s a lot like putting a puzzle together. And I’m with you on the repetition part. When my writing is at its worst, I let Mr. Descriptor — the villain in my head — go to town. Instead of someone just leaving a rude comment, I figure why not one or two or three other descriptors to really tell the reader how mean they are. I go from keeping it simple to going over the top. Ugh.

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    1. Yes, yes! Putting that puzzle of self expression together – no matter what we’re writing. I think you and I so often connect about our very vocal inner critics. 😜
      Yes! Such an evolutionary process…and one that I think you don’t give yourself enough credit for mastering! 🥰

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  5. Wonderful advice … that I know I am incapable of. I have the hardest time editing myself. It reminds me of Charles Kuralt’s advice on writing. Short words, short sentences, short paragraphs. I try but there are just too many words. Oddly though, when I’m speaking I have no problem losing a thread to make the rest of the words more meaningful. I suppose that’s because when I’m speaking I am given so much time work with. I’m sure I could do the same in writing if I limited my total word count. Haha…starting with comments. Sorry for going on and on.

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    1. I love this! I hadn’t heard about Kuralt’s wisdom but I sure did enjoy all of his work. Sunday mornings on CBS? Am I remembering correctly? Such an orator— and I’m sure you’re the same when you speak to groups, Michael! Brevity is good, but you have a knack for weaving in insight that I love. Keep doing you! Word count be damned! 🥰😜🥰

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      1. Thank you Vicki. And yes, CBS Sunday morning as well as a syndicated column as d a handful of books. Would think most everyone would remember or at least have heard “On the Road with Charles Kuralt.”

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        1. That’s the memory! Yes. “On the Road”…so good! 🥰

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  6. Good advice, but don’t discount your art in the process. I don’t find you repetitive, Vicki.

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    1. You’re so kind, my ever-articulate friend. Thank you, Dr. Stein. 🥰

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  7. Thanks for the tip on Nathan Baugh, Vicki. I think I can definitely learn things from him. On one hand, I can say that I do marinate. A lot. But of course, I only post every 2 weeks, so I have that time. BUT, more importantly, I struggle (and my sister does too) with a “personality foible.” We lean way too much towards perfectionism. It’s not hard to trace it back to our mom; if we did things perfectly, then maybe we would get praise. Well, we all know that nothing is perfect and I resist that as I write. But it has been known to rear its ugly head. I just need a mantra “Heck, yeah, this is good” and let the rest go. 🙂

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    1. Adore you…but you already know that, don’t you? 🥰
      You said a couple of things that align…so much so that I know we’re soul sisters. That business of ‘over marinating’. Gah. yes, yes. And for the exact reasons you cited. Even though we know perfectionism is destructive, we still carry those nuggets of wanting do well, receive praise. Thanks for being you and for offering your fab mantra, ‘heck yeah…’. I love it. Xo, Melanie! 🥰

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      1. I am so honored that you label us “soul sisters”, but I do get it. There is a connection (in fact there are several!) 🙂 Ironically enough, I didn’t marinate my mantra, hahahaha. So it goes. Thanks Vicki! Xo 🥰

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        1. Oh…I love that…marinating mantra. Hilarious! I think one of our ‘ties that bind’ is all the Ohio in us, for starters….LOL. xo! 🥰

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          1. Yes! Ohio is a state of mind! ❤️😜❤️

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            1. Yes, yes! 😜🥰😜

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  8. Great advise Victoria.
    Thank you .🙏🤗

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    1. Thank you, Maggie! Xo! 🥰

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  9. Oooh, I love how you’ve made meaning here. Both for writing and for self-understanding. So powerful!!

    And the room to breathe comment is such a good one. I can see why it caught your eye. Thank you for the introduction to Nathan Baugh!

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    1. Yes! For writing and self-understanding. Exactly! Thank you, Wynne! 🥰

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  10. I love the advice you shared from Nathan Baugh. I’m in the processing of editing out a character in my manuscript. I think less characters and storylines will be better. I’m also a firm believer in stepping away and letting writing marinate, using fresh eyes to see a new perspective.

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    1. Ah…thanks for that real life example. That must be a challenge…editing out a character. Cheering you on! 🥰

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      1. It is challenging, but I think it will make the story better.

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        1. Love it! Go, Elizabeth! 🥰

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  11. Hear, hear! I go with a similar concept about writing that I’ve used from the beginning: less is more. Be specific, be succinct.

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    1. I like it! Ally Bean “on brand”.
      🥰❤️🥰

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      1. I probably could turn myself into a brand, but I’ve tried to avoid that. It’s not that I don’t have advice and wisdom, it’s that I’ve always been reluctant to tell other people what to do. The Achilles heel of an introvert. 🤷‍♀️

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        1. Hear you…what I appreciate about you is your consistency. Consistently delightful. You make me think and smile. 🥰

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          1. I can be pleased with that.

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  12. I write, step away, rewrite, repeatedly. This offers time for better words or phrasing to come. I want my works to look like they came clearly out the first time, but that doesn’t happen. This is why I prefer writing over speaking when I can’t edit what I just said.

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    1. I love learning about your process, Mary. Thanks for sharing. Your attention to your craft comes through in your beautiful writing. 🥰

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  13. I think this is great advice

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    1. Isn’t it though? Nothing new but reminders are really helpful for me – about lots of things! 🥰

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      1. same, sometimes it takes a few of them for me )

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  14. great advice and I think a good approach to life in general, though going simple is not always simple to do, but I keep striving for it.

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  15. I’m with Dr. Stein: I don’t think you’re repetitive. And I think Nathan Baugh offers valuable advice. Simplifying can help with clarity. If we keep that in mind while editing, that can help us pare off some stuff that was getting in the way 🌞

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    1. I like that — pare off. Thanks, Dave! ☀️🥰☀️

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  16. Haha

    The best piece of writing advice I’ve gotten is to trust the reader. Trust they got it the first time around 😉

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    1. That’s brilliant! 😜🥰😜

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  17. Wonderful, Vicki. I’ve been marinating on a post about my travels for over four months now. It’s in my head, and I guess it will stay there until it’s ready and finds its way out. I love what you say about who you are as a human: “The human always comes first…words flowing from the inside out, reflecting the interior. Head, heart, memories, hopes, dreams, worries.” Great philosophy, my friend.

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    1. Ah! Praise from you. I love it. Thanks, Edward! And I can’t wait to read what you’ve got cooking about your travels. I’ll look forward to that! 🥰

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      1. You’re very welcome, and my list of Vicki’s quotes keeps growing.

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        1. LOL! You’re funny. And very kind. 🥰

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  18. OMG Vicki, you are not alone in that marination process my friend. Love your mention in the importance of readiness. YES! 😁 Thanks so much for sharing  Nathan Baugh’s advice. Great food for thought indeed. Big hugs and smooches ladybug! 😍💖😘💋🥰

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    1. Your comments always make me smile! Readiness and marination. Yup! Thank you, dear one! 🥰❤️🥰

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      1. You’re welcome Vicki and it seems like our work is never done because we segue into something else so quickly! 😜 Hugs and smooches! 🤗💋😘

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        1. Truth right there! Xo! 🥰 Thanks for being you. ❤️

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          1. Likewise my friend! 😊🥂🥰❤😍

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  19. Love your reflections, Vicki. A great reminder that writing and editing are two separate but necessarily complementary processes. And a good tip to step away from a draft to ruminate before refining further! The efforts is clear in your writing!

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    1. Oh my! Thank you, Ab. Good to step back — yes! Xo! 🥰

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  20. Hi Vicki, this is such a helpful post that resonates. I love the “fewer” concept, feeling that simple or less is best, and editing! Sheesh! Sometimes, I think it’s a never-ending process. I get stuck at times wondering when a poem or story will end. Thanks for sharing Nathan’s advice! 💞

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    1. Hi, Lauren! I’m glad to hear you connect with this. I feel like you do — it’s a never-ending process. Xo 🥰

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      1. And yet, it’s a rewarding never-ending process. I can’t wait to read your next book. 🤗❤️

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        1. You are so sweet. Crossing fingers that it’s coming together. Big hugs to you! 🥰

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          1. I’m sure it is, and big hugs to you working towards that finish line! 🤗💗

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            1. Thank you. So good to have met you, Lauren. Xo! ❤️

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              1. I feel the same, Vicki! 💕😎🌻

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                1. !!!🥰❤️🥰!!!

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  21. 😊😊😊 Have a good evening, Vicki!!!! 🩷

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    1. You, too sweet pea! 🥰

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  22. Nathan sounds like an interesting dude to follow – simplify without losing your audience. This is so good!

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    1. Yes!!! He is an interesting dude. 😉 Thanks, Mary! 🥰

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  23. Taking that moment to step back and pause before hitting Publish is such a smart idea. I’ve adopted that approach myself, and read over my draft several times, editing and making it as concise as possible, before it goes live. As a rather wordy guy, “less is more” was a difficult pill to swallow – but I do believe it has helped.

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    1. I love how your posts weave threads of a story, a vibe, together. Whatever your process, don’t stop. Don’t change! 🥰❤️🥰

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